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free admissions to museums

发布时间：2013-01-03 22:02:01 作者：xiong  发布者：1058319276 浏览次数：3014  类别：中文作文  

In rencent years ,more and  more museums  open to pulic with  no charge.This mesures is aim to develop people`s knowledge and spread history .Culivate  sense of people`s emotion .But some people think is not good measures for museums and  others.For exampl e,the more and more people rush to  museums will destory the peace of environment,andt  the plenty of people visit  museums will destoy  the old history relic.In my opinion ,our government should take some mesures to limit the number of people enter the museums.

 

 

• 批改教师：王思捷 ( 作文批改网 )
  批改时间：2013/1/5 17:37:19
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  In rencent years ,more and  more museums  open to ^the (the public,固定词组，意为“公众”）pulic with  no charge.This mesures （单词拼写错误，measures;this用复数these)is (aim是动词）aim to develop people`s knowledge and spread history .Culivate （historical culture,“历史的文化”，词组) sense of people`s emotion （sence已经有“感觉”的意思了，重复）.But some people think ^they（固定句式）is (与前文一致，用are）not good measures for museums and  others.For exampl e,the more and more people rush to  museums will destory（这个词用的十分不恰当，它指的是毁掉的东西永远不可修复） the peace of （英语中表达“平静”的词语有很多，挨个比较一下，若非用peace,也得改为“peaceful”简洁）environment,andt  the plenty of people visit  museums will destoy  the old history relic.In my opinion ,our government should take some mesures to limit the number of people enter （一个句子中不能有两个动词，改为entering)the museums.

  综述：不像是北京学生写的文章。

   

   

• 批改教师：李晨超 ( )
  批改时间：2013/2/15 16:22:21
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  In rencent years ,more and more museums open to ^the (the public,固定词组，意为“公众”）pulic with no charge.This mesures （单词拼写错误，measures;this用复数these)is (aim是动词）aim to develop people`s knowledge and spread history .Culivate （historical culture,“历史的文化”，词组) sense of people`s emotion （sence已经有“感觉”的意思了，重复）.But some people think ^they（固定句式）is (与前文一致，用are）not good measures for museums and others.For exampl e,the more and more people rush to museums will destory（这个词用的十分不恰当，它指的是毁掉的东西永远不可修复） the peace of （英语中表达“平静”的词语有很多，挨个比较一下，若非用peace,也得改为“peaceful”简洁）environment,andt the plenty of people visit museums will destoy the old history relic.In my opinion ,our government should take some mesures to limit the number of people enter （一个句子中不能有两个动词，改为entering)the museums.

   

  点评：多读，多写。相信你一定会有所提高，加油!

• 批改教师：周绍芬 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇英语备课组 )
  批改时间：2013/2/16 10:51:08
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  In rencent years ,more and  more museums  open to ^the (the public,固定词组，意为“公众”）pulic with  no charge.This mesures （单词拼写错误，measures;this用复数these)is (aim是动词）aim to develop people`s knowledge and spread history .Culivate （historical culture,“历史的文化”，词组) sense of people`s emotion （sence已经有“感觉”的意思了，重复）.But some people think ^they（固定句式）is (与前文一致，用are）not good measures for museums and  others.For exampl e,the more and more people rush to  museums will destory（这个词用的十分不恰当，它指的是毁掉的东西永远不可修复） the peace of （英语中表达“平静”的词语有很多，挨个比较一下，若非用peace,也得改为“peaceful”简洁）environment,andt  the plenty of people visit  museums will destoy  the old history relic.In my opinion ,our government should take some mesures to limit the number of people enter （一个句子中不能有两个动词，改为entering)the museums.

  点评：要多努力了！