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Character Education

发布时间：2013-01-10 13:36:21 作者：李景军  发布者：271678682 浏览次数：4656  类别：英文作文  

 Nowadays more and more people are showing their increasing concern over the problem of students’ education.It is commonly recognized that students should study hard to achieve their schoolwork.But they ignore the importance of character education.
        Character education loosely refers to teaching students in a manner that imparts one or more positive character qualities—such as to make them moral, civic, good, well mannered, non-bullying, healthy, critical, successful, traditional, compliant socially acceptable.  In some modern countries it has been fashionable to think that character education for all can solve all the problems of society and build a perfect nation.Character Education is effectively integrated into the Social Studies Standard Course of Study and may be used as the underpinning for other critical issues such as discipline problems, gang violence, teen pregnancy, and poor academic achievement.
      in a word ,schools are not allowed to have classes and texts,students should have character education.

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   Nowadays more and more people are showing their increasing concern over （about）the problem of students’ education.It is commonly recognized that students should study hard to achieve their schoolwork.But they ignore the importance of character education.
     Character education loosely refers to teaching students in a manner that imparts one or more positive character qualities—such as to make them moral, civic, good, well mannered, non-bullying, healthy, critical, successful, traditional, ^and compliant socially acceptable.  In some modern countries it has been fashionable to think that character education for all can solve all the problems of society  （去掉to,用fashionablely，而且这话太绝对。）and build a perfect nation.Character Education is effectively integrated into the Social Studies Standard Course of Study and may be used as the underpinning for （of）other critical issues such as discipline problems, gang （gun）violence, teen （teenager)pregnancy, and poor academic achievement.
        in a word ,schools are not allowed to have classes and texts,students should have character education. (这是什么话，不能太偏激）

      写文章表达自己的批判观点可以，但不能犯原则性错误。