批改符号说明：

绿底为优美，黄底为瑕疵，红底为错字（括号里边为间批），中间横线为删除，^{上标符号添加字}，文下隔行写点评，点评内容用红字，红双线“‖”处段另起（分段）.

 

My Feelings after reading Wuthering Heights

发布时间：2013-03-03 15:17:46 作者：王啸  发布者：wx1994 浏览次数：4294  类别：中文作文   优秀指数：★★

  Wuthering Heights is a well-written tragedy of love. After reading the whole story, I would like to talk about the main characters of the story—Catherine Earnshaw and Heathcliff. Catherine Earnshaw and Heathcliff do love each other very much, but they do not have the right attitude towards love, which leads to the tragedy.
  In Catherine’s life, she made a very foolish decision---marrying to Edgar. In fact, her love for Edgar can never be compared to that for Heathcliff. She did so, because she thought the wealth of Edgar would be useful to help Heathcliff. But in reality, it did not work. She did not have a good understanding of love, which is something pure and saint. If anyone add any purpose into love, love itself lost its meaning. Catherine’s wrong decision hurt two people who love her, and even destroyed the happiness of their offspring.
  Heathcliff is a man full of retaliation. He loved Catherine very much, but what he did, on the contrary, added to the misery of Catherine. In my opinion, if he really loved Catherine, he should not walk into Catherine’s life again after his disappearance. Further more, after the death of Catherine, what Heathcliff did brought agony to Catherine’s daughter, as well as his own son.
  After reading, I have a better understanding of love. If you love really someone, his or her happiness is the thing that most matters.

• 批改教师：王思捷 ( 作文批改网 )
  批改时间：2013/3/3 22:44:39
  点评指数：★★
  点评内容：
  

    Wuthering Heights is a well-written tragedy of love. After reading the whole story, I would like to talk about the main characters of (in,在故事里）the story—Catherine Earnshaw and Heathcliff. Catherine Earnshaw and Heathcliff do love each other very much, but they do not have the right attitude towards love, which leads to the tragedy.
    In Catherine’s life, she made a very foolish decision---marrying to Edgar. In fact, her love for Edgar can never be compared to （with，固定搭配）that for Heathcliff. She did so, because she thought the wealth of Edgar （Edgar's wealth，简洁）would be useful to help Heathcliff. But in reality, it did not work. She did not have a good understanding of （for，对于）love, which is something pure and saint. If anyone add any purpose into love, love itself lost its meaning. Catherine’s wrong decision hurt two people who love her, and even destroyed the happiness of their offspring.
    Heathcliff is a man full of retaliation. He loved Catherine very much, but what he did, on the contrary, added to the misery of Catherine. In my opinion, if he really loved Catherine, he should not walk into Catherine’s life again after his disappearance. Further more, after the death of Catherine, what Heathcliff did brought agony to Catherine’s daughter, as well as his own son.
    After reading ^{the story}, I have a better understanding of （for）love. If you love really (颠倒一下顺序)someone, his or her happiness is the thing that most matters.

  点评：一篇不错的读后感，对人物性格分析很到位，注意一下细节。