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I'm helpful

发布时间：2013-03-07 20:08:35 作者：陈永娟  发布者：chenyongjuan 浏览次数：6801  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★

I'm helpful.I can putaway the clothes.I can wash the clothes.I can make the bed.I can do the dishes.I can set the table.I can sweep the floor.I can water the flowers and I can clean the bedroom.

• 批改教师：王思捷 ( 作文批改网 )
  批改时间：2013/3/7 22:18:41
  点评指数：★
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  I'm helpful.I can put away the clothes.I can wash the clothes.I can make the bed.I can do (wash)the dishes.I can set the table.I can sweep the floor.I can water the flowers and I can clean the bedroom.

  点评：文章流畅，错误少，但总是“I can...”的句型是否可以换一下。

• 批改教师：杜宝红 ( 山东省 >> 泰安市 >> 岱岳区 >> 泰山菁华双语学校 )
  批改时间：2013/3/8 15:28:37
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  I'm ^a helpful ^child.I can putaway ^{put away} the clothes.I can ^,wash the clothes.I ,can ^,make the bed.I can ^,do the dishes.I can ^,set the table.I can ^,sweep the floor.I can ^,water the flowers and I can clean the bedroom.^{What about you?}
• 批改教师：王天艳 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇英语备课组 )
  批改时间：2013/3/16 19:19:06
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  I'm helpful.I can put away the clothes.I can wash the clothes.I can make the bed.I can do the dishes.I can set the table.I can sweep the floor.I can water the flowers and I can clean the bedroom.

  You're helpful!