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My Day

发布时间：2013-03-08 22:01:10 作者：陈思婉  发布者：872575723 浏览次数：3328  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★★

  My day is interesting.

  I get up at six ten.At about half past six,I have breakfast and go to school.Then, I have five lessons in the morning. The first lesson begins at a quarter past seven.

  At twelve o'clock,I have lunch at home with my parents.In the afternoon,I have three lessons.After school,I practice running with my classmates.At a quarter to six,I go home on foot.

  In the evening,I have supper at six thirty. Then,I do my homework for about two hours and I play computer game for a short time.In the end,I go to bed at ten o'clock.

  This is my day!

• 批改教师：王思捷 ( 作文批改网 )
  批改时间：2013/3/9 12:56:52
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    My day is interesting.

    I get up at six ten.At about half past six,I have breakfast and go to school.Then, I have five lessons in the morning. The first lesson begin^s（单数第三人称谓语动词后加s） at a quarter past seven.

    At twelve o'clock,I have lunch at home with my parents.In the afternoon,I have three lessons.After school,I am practice running with my classmates.At a quarter to six,I am go home on foot.(practice，go都是动词，不用am）

    In the evening,I have supper at six thirty. Then,I do my homework about two hours and I play computer for a short time.In the end,I go to bed at ten o'clock.

    This is my day!

  点评：此篇文章入题快，语言错误少，没有废话，做到了前后照应，是篇好文章。

• 批改教师：杜宝红 ( 山东省 >> 泰安市 >> 岱岳区 >> 泰山菁华双语学校 )
  批改时间：2013/3/9 19:49:31
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    My day is interesting.

    I get up at six ten.At about half past six,I have breakfast and go to school.Then, I have five lessons in the morning. The first lesson begin ^begins at a quarter past seven.

    At twelve o'clock,I have lunch at home with my parents.In the afternoon,I have three lessons.After school,I am practice running with my classmates.At a quarter to six,I am go home on foot.

    In the evening,I have supper at six thirty. Then,I do my homework ^for about two hours and I play computer ^games for a short time.In the end,I go to bed at ten o'clock.

    This is my day!