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on college marriage

发布时间：2013-03-23 16:02:17 作者：周雪婷  发布者：110924110 浏览次数：3970  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★★

    Recently,some colleges admit the students who get married at the right age. Should college students be allowed to get married ? Different people have different views.

    There is no denying the fact that it is a hotly debated topic to day whether college students should be allowed to get married.They think that most college students are adults and that it is a basic right for those who have reached the appropriate ages to get married.Besides,they can look after each other , they can enjoy just only the time for themselves .

    On the other hands,someone hold the negative opposite views.They think that the university is a place to stusy instead of loving and a community to lead family .Get married in college could affect them study.

    As far as i am concerned ,i believe that college students should not be allowed to get married. As students ,we should spend time on studying, not family and love.

• 批改教师：王思捷 ( 作文批改网 )
  批改时间：2013/3/27 12:59:51
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      Recently,some colleges admit the students who get married at the right age^s. Should college students be allowed to get married ? Different people have different views.

      There is no denying the fact that it is a hotly debated topic to day (today)whether college students should be allowed to get married.（和****段内容有些重复）They think that most college students are adults and that it is a basic right for those who have reached the appropriate ages to get married.Besides,they can look after （take care with)each other , they can enjoy just only the time for (belongs to)themselves .

      On the other hands,(However)someone hold the negative (词语意思重复）opposite views.They think that the university is a place to stusy instead of loving and a community to lead （buliding up)family .Get^ing married in college could affect them study.

      As far as i am concerned ,i believe that college students should not be allowed to get married. As students ,we should spend time on studying, not family and love.

  点评：文章观点清晰，逻辑明确，注意用词的精准性。