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What do you do on the weekend?

发布时间：2013-04-04 20:52:49 作者：王永彩  发布者：wangyongcai 浏览次数：5514  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★

    I have Chinese , math ,music ,P.E.and English on the Monday . I have English ,Chinese and math on the Tuesday. I have English , Art and math on the Wedneday. I don't like Wednesday . I have Chinese ,math , and music on Thursday . I have music , P.E.and art on Friday . Friday is my favourite day .I often do my homework , read books on the Saturday . I often watch TV and play computer games on Sunday.

 

• 批改教师：王思捷 ( 作文批改网 )
  批改时间：2013/4/5 13:04:37
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      I have Chinese , math ,music ,P.E.and English ^classes on the Monday . I have English ,Chinese and math on the Tuesday. I have English , Art and math on the Wedneday. I don't like Wednesday . I have Chinese ,math , and music on Thursday . I have music , P.E.and art on Friday . （以上几句都不合适，属于废话的范畴）Friday is my favourite day .I often do my homework , read books on the Saturday . I often watch TV and play computer games on Sunday.

  点评：我相信，只要不上各种各样的补习班、特长训练班，小学生的周末应该比较有色彩的，应该把它展开。例如一天的详细活动，之后的收获等。

• 批改教师：郝文越 ( 山西省 >> 晋中市 >> 平遥县 >> 中都乡 >> 中都乡桥头小学 )
  批改时间：2013/4/5 21:06:32
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  I have Chinese , math ,music ,P.E.and English on the Monday . I have English ,Chinese and math on the Tuesday. I have English , Art and math on the Wedneday. I don't like Wednesday . I have Chinese ,math , and music on Thursday . I have music , P.E.and art on Friday . Friday is my favourite day .I often do my homework , read books on the Saturday . I often watch TV and play computer games on Sunday.

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    语句通顺，内容以所学书本知识为主，要学会在所学知识的基础上扩充，增加词汇量。

   

• 批改教师：王天艳 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇英语备课组 )
  批改时间：2013/4/7 20:37:58
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      I have Chinese , math ,music ,P.E.and English on the Mondays. I have English ,Chinese and math on the Tuesday. I have English , art and math on the Wedneday. I don't like Wednesday . I have Chinese ,math , and music on Thursdays . I have music , P.E.and art on Fridays . Friday is my favourite day .I often do my homework , read books on the Saturday . I often watch TV and play computer games on Sunday.