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My View on Social Investigation

发布时间：2013-04-15 18:26:04 作者：九阳  发布者：我是九阳 浏览次数：3301  类别：中文作文  

As we known, more and more colleges even some high schools, will require students to make social survey. This question is related to students’ study and life.

Some think doing that is important of student to close to society and to study from others but not teachers. And they also think it is good for writing the articles. In other hand, some think doing this is wasting time, because students can’t do that work well according their study. And students should spend most time on studying.

In my opinions, students should study in the most time, and they also should do some survey. The survey will help them to learn more which they can’t study in the class. And doing that can also test their study. But students should remember study is first in all things.

• 批改教师：王思捷 ( 作文批改网 )
  批改时间：2013/4/15 18:36:05
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  As we known, more and more colleges even some high schools, will require students to make (do)social survey. This question (problem)is related to students’ study^ies and lives.

  Some think doing that is important of (for)student to close (walk into)to society and to study from others but not teachers. And they also think it is good for writing the articles. In other hand, some think doing this is wasting (a waste of)time, because students can’t do that work well according their study. And students should spend most time on studying.

  In my opinions, students should study in the most time, and they also should do some survey. The survey will help them to learn more which they can’t study in the class. And doing that can also test their study. But students should remember study is ^the first in all things.

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  批改时间：2013/4/18 11:26:34
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  As we known, more and more colleges even some high schools, will require students to make social survey. This question is related to students’ study and life.

  Some think doing that is important of student to close to society and to study from others but not teachers. And they also think it is good for writing the articles. In other hand, some think doing this is wasting time, because students can’t do that work well according their study. And students should spend most time on studying.

  In my opinions, students should study in the most time, and they also should do some survey. The survey will help them to learn more which they can’t study in the class. And doing that can also test their study. But students should remember study is first in all things.