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发布时间:2020-05-01 20:19:57 作者:陈亦佳  发布者:2811776493 浏览次数:151  类别:英文作文  
[非在校学生] 浙江省 >> 嘉兴市 >> 秀洲区 >> 塘汇街道


Dear Jane,

    I am going to hold a dinner party in my house on Saturday,May 9th,2020 to celebrate my mother's 60th birthday.My parents and I do hope you can come and share our joy.

    The party will start at six o'clock in the evening.There will be a big musical soiree,at which a band will perform some popular songs at first.At around seven o'clock,we will start our dineer.After the dinner all the friends will have some photos together.

   I know you have been busy these weeks,but I would be very happy to have you with us.

                                                                                                                                              Yours sincerely,

                                                                                                                                                  Wang Lin

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