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发布时间:2022-12-05 11:14:39 作者:商俊博  发布者:软软的棉花糖 浏览次数:956  类别:英文作文  
[高中二年级]


Dear Ms. Chen Ms. Chen, you are our head teacher and the most responsible teacher that I have ever seen. After I came to this class, my grades dropped significantly because of the inadaptation to the difficulty of the subjects and the new class. You noticed my condition and communicated with me without hesitation. As a good student in ordinary times, I have never been called to the teacher's office. Shamed and worried, I stepped into your office. To my surprise, you didn’t yell at me as I imaged. Instead of scolding me angrily, you pulled me to sit next to you. “How is everything going? Do you have something confused?” Your gentle words soothed my anxiety. You had a sincere smile on your face and gently helped me adjust my mind. Your efforts were not in vain. In the second monthly exam, my scores have improved by leaps and bounds, and I got the first good result in new class. Not only did I regain the ranking, but I broke the best record as well. I was also relieved to see your face finally showing a sweet smile. Without your help, I might not have the opportunity to obtain such excellent results. You are hero in my heart. You are the most responsible teacher I have ever seen. I would like to express my highest respect to you. A student who are admire you most
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