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在图书馆用手机的利弊

发布时间：2013-04-22 13:18:24 作者：韦海航  发布者：1090874157@qq.com> 浏览次数：4645  类别：中文作文  

Mobile phone in our daily life more and more widely applied, 'it's function is also more and more.Such as playing a game. Chatting on the Internet, online shopping, etc. Students use it everywhere. Included in the library

 

Can know according to the survey, most of the students think that using a mobile phone in the library is has many advantages, such as learning difficulties, can use a mobile phone to check information, learning tired can use mobile phones to listen to music, relax, and you can keep in touch with people outside. But some students don't think so, they say mobile phone in the library not only influence the learning effect and influence others

 

Using a mobile phone in the library, in my opinion, there are many benefits, because inside not outside can communicate with classmate, when we encounter difficulties, that is we can use it

 

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  Mobile phone^s in our daily life (lives) ^are more and more widely applied, 'it's (Their)function^s is (are)also ^renewed more and more.Such (such)as playing a game. Chatting on the Internet, online shopping, etc. Students use it everywhere. Included (including)in the library

   

  Can know according to the survey, most of the students think that using a mobile phone in the library is has many advantages, such as learning (solving)difficulties, can use a mobile phone to check (looking for)information, learning (When studying)tired, ^they can use mobile phones to listen to music, relax, and you can keep in touch with people outside. But some students don't think so, they say mobile phone in the library not only influence the learning effect and (but also)influence (disturb)others

   

  Using a mobile phone in the library, in my opinion, there are (has)many benefits, because inside not outside ^we can communicate with classmate ^{both inside and outside}, when we encounter difficulties, that is we can use it