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Health is better than wealth

发布时间：2013-04-23 20:43:40 作者：陈慧丽  发布者：A15陈慧丽 浏览次数：5938  类别：英文作文  

Recently ,there is a fierce discuss about the importance of health and wealth.

Most thinks that wealth is most important in our life.if we have big money,we can travel the worldand have everything that we would buy.However,the wealth can not buy our health.

If we loss our health,we can not enjoy the wealth.but if we do not have wealth ,we can enjoy our health.the people in health can casually travel ,walk,run,talk,eat and laugh loudly.in a word,the people in health have a better life than the people in wealth.

Above all,I think health is better than wealth.

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  Recently ,there is a fierce discuss^ion about the importance of health and wealth.

  Most thinks that wealth is ^the most important in our life.if we have big (large amount of)money,we can travel the worldand (worldland)have everything that we would (want to)buy.However,the wealth can not buy our health.

  If we loss our health,we can not enjoy the wealth.but if we do not have wealth ,we can enjoy our health.the ^healthy people in health can casually travel ,walk,run,talk,eat and laugh loudly.in a word,the ^healthy people in health have a better life than the people（those)in wealth.

  Above all,I think health is better than wealth.