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The e-books versus the traditional books

发布时间：2013-04-24 21:09:32 作者：陈慧丽  发布者：A15陈慧丽 浏览次数：6522  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★★

As the economic society is getting a rapid development.The e-books get more and more popular.At the same time,the traditional books lost their chief position.

most people think the e-books are better than the traditional books.They can read the e-books everywhere by their phones and computers.Moreover,they find the e-books what they want in computer,and they can read free.While they think the traditional books are not convenient.

On the contrary,some people think the traditional books are better.Readers can gain more enjoyment from the traditional books.It is more comfortable for the readers to read and learn.However,they think the e-books are embarrassing.

In my opinion,I think the e-books are better than the traditional books.The e-books are important to me.I love the e-books.

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  批改时间：2013/4/25 13:03:28
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  As the economic society is (economy and society are)getting a rapid development.The e-books get (are getting)more and more popular.At the same time,the traditional books lost (are losing)their chief position.

  most people think the e-books are better than the traditional books.They can read the e-books everywhere by (on)their phones and computers.Moreover,they find the e-books what they want in (through)computer,and they can read free.While they think the traditional books are not convenient.

  On the contrary,some people think the traditional books are better.Readers can gain more enjoyment from the traditional books.It is more comfortable for the readers to read and learn.However,they think the e-books are embarrassing(ed).

  In my opinion,I think the e-books are better than the traditional books.The e-books are important to me.I love the e-books.