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My family

发布时间：2013-04-29 10:30:05 作者：孙绍慧  发布者：1569772150 浏览次数：3189  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★★

   There are four people in my family.My father is a worker.He goes to work by car.He likes playing computer games.My mother is a farmer.She likes singsing.she is taller than me.My brother is younger than me.He likes watching TV.I am a student.I like dancing.

  I love my family. 

• 批改教师：陈志强 ( 河北省 >> 石家庄市 >> 桥西区 >> 红旗街道 )
  批改时间：2013/4/29 23:04:34
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     There are four people in my family.My father is a worker.He goes to work by car.He likes playing computer games.My mother is a farmer.She likes singsing.she is taller than me.My brother is younger than me.He likes watching TV.I am a student.I like dancing.

    I love my family. 

• 批改教师：王思捷 ( 作文批改网 )
  批改时间：2013/4/30 21:57:29
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     There are four people in my family.My father is a worker.He goes to work by car.He likes playing computer games.My mother is a farmer.She likes singsing.she is taller than me.My brother is younger than me.He likes watching TV.I am a student.I like dancing.

    I love my family. 

• 批改教师：王天艳 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇英语备课组 )
  批改时间：2013/5/4 19:54:18
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     There are four people in my family.My father is a worker.He goes to work by car.He likes playing computer games.My mother is a farmer.She likes singing.she She is taller than me.My brother is younger than me.He likes watching TV.I am a student.I like dancing.

    I love my family.