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My day

发布时间：2013-04-30 21:50:24 作者：王舒文  发布者：wangshuwen 浏览次数：2882  类别：英文作文  

                             My day

    I have a happy day.

    I get up at 6点00.I do morning exercises at 6点30。Then i eat breakfast at 7点.I go to school by bus.I have English class at8点.I usually play sport at 4点.Igo home at 5点30.I eat dinner at 6点40.I go to bed at 9点.This is my day.

    How are about you/

 

• 批改教师：王思捷 ( 作文批改网 )
  批改时间：2013/4/30 22:07:14
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                               My day

      I have a happy day.

      I get up at 6点00(6 a.m.).I do morning exercises at 6点30(6:30a.m.)。Then i eat breakfast at 7点(7:00a.m.).I go to school by bus.I have English class at8点(at 8:00a.m.).I usually play sport at 4点(16:00或4:00p.m.).I go home at 5点30(17:30或5:30p.m.).I eat dinner at 6点40(18:40或6:40p.m.).I go to bed at 9点(21:00或9:00p.m.).This is my day.

      How are about you/

   

• 批改教师：王天艳 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇英语备课组 )
  批改时间：2013/5/4 19:52:13
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                               My day

      I have a happy day.

      I get up at 6点00.I do morning exercises at 6点30。Then i I eat breakfast at 7点.I go to school by bus.I have English class at8点.I usually play sports at 4点.Igo home at 5点30.I eat dinner at 6点40.I go to bed at 9点.This is my day.

      How are about you?