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Birthday

发布时间：2013-04-30 21:58:02 作者：王舒文  发布者：wangshuwen 浏览次数：2789  类别：英文作文  

                                  Birthday

    Hello.I am Lucy.

    My birthday is in September.My mother is birthday is in November.And my father is birthdy is in Janury.

    What about you/

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  批改时间：2013/4/30 22:09:46
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                                    Birthday

      Hello.I am Lucy.

      My birthday is in September.My mother(mother's) is birthday is in November.And my father (father's)is birthdy is in Janury.

      What about you/

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                                    Birthday

      Hello.I am Lucy.

      My birthday is in September.My mother's birthday is in November.And my father's birthdy is in Janury January.

      What about you?