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my favourite season

发布时间：2013-05-05 16:11:45 作者：段荣坤  发布者：2413368936 浏览次数：2448  类别：中文作文   优秀指数：★

              My favourite season

My favourite season is summer.It's sunny and very hot.I can eat ice-cream and swim in the sea.

I like summer very march.

段荣坤 临沂湖南崖小学 五年级一班

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                My favourite season

  My favourite season is summer.Is （It is)sunny and very hot.I can eat ice-cream and swim in the sea.

  I like summer very march.

  段荣坤 临沂湖南崖小学 五年级一班

• 批改教师：冯琼英 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇英语备课组 )
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                My favourite season

  My favourite season is summer.Is（It's） sunny and very hot.I can eat ice-creams and swim in the sea.

  I like summer very march.

  段荣坤 临沂湖南崖小学 五年级一班

• 批改教师：王天艳 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇英语备课组 )
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                My favourite season

  My favourite season is summer.Is It's sunny and very hot.I can eat ice-cream and swim in the sea.

  I like summer very march.

  段荣坤 临沂湖南崖小学 五年级一班