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This is my day

发布时间：2013-05-05 16:25:13 作者：段荣坤  发布者：2413368936 浏览次数：3163  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★★★★

              This is my day

Hi! I'm Anna.I get up at 6:00 every day in the morning.I eat breakfast at 6:40.Then I go to school at 7:00.We do morning exercises at 10:00.I go home at 5:00 p.m.I eat dinner at 6:30 in the evening.I go to bed at 9:30p.m.This is my day.

段荣坤 临沂湖南崖小学 五年级一班 

• 批改教师：王思捷 ( 作文批改网 )
  批改时间：2013/5/5 16:27:59
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                This is my day

  Hi! I'm Anna.I get up at 6:00 every day in the morning.I eat breakfast at 6:40.Then I go to school at 7:00.We do morning exercises at 10:00.I go home at 5:00 p.m.I eat dinner at 6:30 in the evening.I go to bed at 9:30^p.m.This is my day.

  段荣坤 临沂湖南崖小学 五年级一班 

• 批改教师：冯琼英 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇英语备课组 )
  批改时间：2013/5/6 22:48:58
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                This is my day

  Hi! I'm Anna.I get up at 6:00 every day in the morning.I eat breakfast at 6:40.Then I go to school at 7:00.We do morning exercises at 10:00.I go home at 5:00 p.m.I eat dinner at 6:30 in the evening.I go to bed at 9:30.This is my day.

  段荣坤 临沂湖南崖小学 五年级一班 

  点评：段同学能用准确的句式描述自己真实的日常生活，思路清晰。

• 批改教师：王天艳 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇英语备课组 )
  批改时间：2013/5/7 18:34:23
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                This is my day

  Hi! I'm Anna.I get up at 6:00 in the morning every day .I eat breakfast at 6:40.Then I go to school at 7:00.We do morning exercises at 10:00.I go home at 5:00 p.m.I eat dinner at 6:30 in the evening.I go to bed at 9:30.This is my day.

  段荣坤 临沂湖南崖小学 五年级一班