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发布时间：2013-05-05 18:02:12 作者：付蓉  发布者：bravegirlR 浏览次数：3093  类别：英文作文  

  It's true that,since more and more high school graduate students to enter universities,downloading essays from internet has already become a fashion thing.

  Signficantly,downloading essays from internet is not bad way to learn more knowledge,in other words,that can exploit the thinking simulation,make students consummate their own essays.Instead of,confined to themselves'.

  Of course,downloading essays from internet are not perfect.It's important to say that downloading essays are easily leading students to contract bad habits of copy other's opinions rather than independent study. on the other hand,teachers may realize that they didn't write essays by themself.

  Clearly,for myself,I should choose the means that downloading essays from internet,I want to get more different thinking to guide me enrich the essay of my.In fact,I an not able to copy the whole from internet,just as a reference,or make it be the literature to sustain my theory.

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    It's true that,since more and more high school graduate students to enter universities,downloading essays from internet has already become a fashion （usual)thing.

    Signficantly,downloading essays from internet is not ^a bad way to learn^ing more knowledge,in other words,that can exploit the thinking simulation,make^ing students consummate ^with their own essays(views).Instead of,confined^ing to themselves'.

    Of course,downloading essays from internet are (is)not perfect(very good).It's important to say that downloading essays are (is)easily ^to leading students to contract bad habits of (with)copy^ing other's opinions rather than independent study ^{independently}. on the other hand,teachers may realize that they didn't (don't)write essays by themself(themselves).

    Clearly,for myself,I should choose the means that downloading essays from internet,I want to get more different thinking （thoughts)to guide me enrich the essay of my(my essays).In fact,I an (am)not able to copy the whole from internet,just as a reference,or make it be the literature (literary)to sustain my theory.