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This is my day (第二次作文）

发布时间：2013-05-06 19:12:45 作者：陈永娟  发布者：chenyongjuan 浏览次数：3256  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★★★★★

  Hi!My name's Chen Yongjuan.Now I am in Grade.5 Every day,I get up at 6:00 in the morning.I do morning exerciese at 6:15 in the morning.Then I have breakfast at 6:30.I go to school at 6:50 in the morning.I have English class at 8:00 in the morning.I eat lunch at 11:30 in the noon.I usually play sports at 4:00p.m.I go home at about 5:30.I eat dinner at 6:00 in the evening, and I go to bed at 8:00in the evening.

• 批改教师：郝文越 ( 山西省 >> 晋中市 >> 平遥县 >> 中都乡 >> 中都乡桥头小学 )
  批改时间：2013/5/6 19:28:14
  点评指数：★★
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    Hi!My name's Chen Yongjuan.Now I am in Grade5. Every day,I get up at 6:00 in the morning.I do morning exerciese at 6:15 in the morning.Then I have breakfast at 6:30.I go to school at 6:50 in the morning.I have English class at 8:00 in the morning.I eat lunch at 11:30 in the noon.I usually play sports at 4:00p.m.I go home at about 5:30.I eat dinner at 6:00 in the evening, and I go to bed at 8:00in the evening.

  点评：

  你的生活是紧张的，希望也是高效的。你能把所学知识和自己的生活联系起来，这就是进步！不过我还是希望学生能努力写一写课本上没有的，哪怕是一句两句。

• 批改教师：王思捷 ( 作文批改网 )
  批改时间：2013/5/6 19:51:26
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    Hi!My name's Chen Yongjuan.Now I am in Grade.5 Every day,I get up at 6:00 in the morning.I do morning exerciese at 6:15 in the morning.Then I have breakfast at 6:30.I go to school at 6:50 in the morning.I have English class at 8:00 in the morning.I eat lunch at 11:30 in the (at)noon.I usually play sports at 4:00p.m.I go home at about 5:30.I eat dinner at 6:00 in the evening, and I go to bed at 8:00in the evening(at night).
• 批改教师：冯琼英 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇英语备课组 )
  批改时间：2013/5/6 22:46:20
  点评指数：★★★
  点评内容：
    Hi!My name's Chen Yongjuan.Now I am in Grade.5 Every day,I get up at 6:00 in the morning.I do morning exerciese （exercises）at 6:15 in the morning.Then I have breakfast at 6:30.I go to school at 6:50 in the morning.I have English class at 8:00 in the morning.I eat lunch at 11:30 in the noon（morning）.I usually play sports at 4:00p.m.I go home at about 5:30.I eat dinner at 6:00 in the evening and I go to bed at 8:00 in the evening.
• 批改教师：王天艳 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇英语备课组 )
  批改时间：2013/5/7 18:57:21
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    Hi!My name's Chen Yongjuan.Now I am in Grade 5.Every day,I get up at 6:00 in the morning.I do morning exerciese exercises at 6:15 in the morning.Then I have breakfast at 6:30.I go to school at 6:50 in the morning.I have English class at 8:00 in the morning.I eat lunch at 11:30 in the noon morning.I usually play sports at 4:00p.m.I go home at about 5:30.I eat dinner at 6:00 in the evening, and I go to bed at 8:00in the evening.

  注意时间的使用。