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This is my weekend （第二次作文）

发布时间：2013-05-06 19:22:19 作者：陈永娟  发布者：chenyongjuan 浏览次数：2743  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★

  Every weekend,I usually go shopping at 9:00 in the morning.Usually I visit my grandparents at 11:00a.m.I do homework at 1:00p.m.I often play sports at 4:00p.m.What is your weekend?Can you tell me please?

• 批改教师：郝文越 ( 山西省 >> 晋中市 >> 平遥县 >> 中都乡 >> 中都乡桥头小学 )
  批改时间：2013/5/6 19:37:41
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    Every weekend,I usually go shopping at 9:00 in the morning.Usually I visit my grandparents at 11:00a.m.I do homework at 1:00p.m.I often play sports at 4:00p.m.What is （What about）your weekend?Can you tell me please?

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   “every”是“每个”的意思，“usually”是“通常”的意思，这两个词不能用在一起，要改一下，只能用一个。

   

• 批改教师：王思捷 ( 作文批改网 )
  批改时间：2013/5/6 19:52:11
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    Every weekend,I usually go shopping at 9:00 in the morning.Usually I visit my grandparents at 11:00a.m.I do homework at 1:00p.m.I often play sports at 4:00p.m.What is your weekend?Can you tell me please?