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My favourite season(第二次作文）

发布时间：2013-05-06 19:32:38 作者：陈永娟  发布者：chenyongjuan 浏览次数：3270  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★★★★

My favourite season is spring.Because spring is windy and warm.I can plant trees and fly kites.I like fall and winter too.   The fall is cool and windy.The sky is very blue.The leaves are colourful.In winter I can skate and make a sonwman.              I like spring,fall and winter very much!  

• 批改教师：王思捷 ( 作文批改网 )
  批改时间：2013/5/6 19:59:29
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  My favourite season is spring.Because spring is windy and warm.I can plant trees and fly kites.I like fall and winter too.   The fall is cool and windy.The sky is very blue.The leaves are colourful.In winter I can skate and make a sonwman（snowman)I like spring,fall and winter very much!  
• 批改教师：冯琼英 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇英语备课组 )
  批改时间：2013/5/6 22:37:06
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  My favourite season is spring.Because spring is windy and warm.I can plant trees and fly kites.I like fall and winter,too.The fall is cool and windy.The sky is very blue.The leaves are colourful.In winter I can skate and make a sonwman.              I like spring,fall and winter very much! 

  点评：陈永娟同学能够进行英语的二次作文，值得很多同学学习，很棒，继续努力。小小的建议，英语作文和汉语作文类似，内容要贴近主题、题目。题目是要介绍自己****的一个季节，可以围绕某个季节进行描述。