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My day

发布时间：2013-05-07 21:52:12 作者：杜子郡  发布者：duzijun 浏览次数：2700  类别：英文作文  

  My day is very fun.I usually get up at 6:30 in the morning.I often eat breakfast at 6:50.Sometimes I go to school at 6:20.Usually I go to school at 7:00.I often eat lunch at 12:00.I usually eat dinner at 5:30.I often go to bed at 9:00.Then is my day.What about you?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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    My day is very fun.I usually get up at 6:30 in the morning.I often eat (have)breakfast at 6:50.Sometimes I go to school at 6:20.Usually I go to school at 7:00.I often eat(have) lunch at 12:00.I usually eat (have)dinner at 5:30.I often go to bed at 9:00.Then(This) is my day.What about you?