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My family

发布时间：2013-05-08 18:47:12 作者：刘祥娣  发布者：liuxiangdi 浏览次数：3010  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★★★

  There are six people in my family.               

  My mother,father,brother,grendpa,grendma and me.

  I am shorter than my mother.

  I am thinner than my father.

  I am younger than my grendparents.

  I am stronger than my  brother.

  This is my family.

• 批改教师：冯琼英 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇英语备课组 )
  批改时间：2013/5/8 21:40:50
  点评指数：★★★
  点评内容：
  

    There are six people in my family.               

    My mother,my father,my brother,my grendpa（grandpa）,grendma（grandma） and me.

    I am shorter than my mother.

    I am thinner than my father.

    I am younger than my grendparents（grandparents）.

    I am stronger than my  brother.

    This is my family.

  点评：祥娣同学的英语作文书写水平越来越高了，有开头有结尾，继续努力！
  

• 批改教师：王思捷 ( 作文批改网 )
  批改时间：2013/5/10 13:11:25
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  点评内容：
  

    There are six people in my family.               

    My mother,father,brother,grendpa,grendma and me(I).

    I am shorter than my mother.

    I am thinner than my father.

    I am younger than my grendparents.

    I am stronger than my  brother.

    This is my family.

  写的错误很少，但句子单一。