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My math teacher.

发布时间：2013-05-08 18:54:28 作者：王舒文  发布者：wangshuwen 浏览次数：3368  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★★★★

                                  My math teacher

    I have a new math teacher.He is Mr Ge.He is strong and tall.He is a university stunden.He is quiet and strict.But he is very kind.He class has so much fun.I like my math teacher very much. 

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                                    My math teacher

      I have a new math teacher.He is Mr Ge.He is strong and tall.He is a university stunden（student）.He is quiet and strict.But he is very kind.He （His）class has so much fun.I like my math teacher very much. 

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                                    My math teacher

      I have a new math teacher.He is Mr Ge.He is strong and tall.He is a university stunden（student).He is quiet and strict.But he is very kind.He class has so much fun.I like my math teacher very much. 

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                                    My math teacher

      I have a new math teacher.He is Mr Ge.He is strong and tall.He is a university stunden.He is quiet and strict.But he is very kind.(His)He class (is)has so much fun.I like my math teacher very much. 

   

       Good job!写得不错哟！很高兴你能喜欢你的New math teacher.在校园里，就得学会如何更好地与老师和同学友好相处。你是个惹人喜爱的girl! Come on!