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My day

发布时间：2013-05-08 21:00:05 作者：刘晓慧  发布者：liuxiaohui 浏览次数：3270  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★★

                          My day

I usually get up at 6:30.I often eat breakfast at 6:40.Usually I go to school at 7:00 .Sometimes I play soprts at 8:30.I often eat dinner at 6:00.

This is my day!

• 批改教师：冯琼英 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇英语备课组 )
  批改时间：2013/5/8 21:20:16
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                            My day

  I usually get up at 6:30.I often eat breakfast at 6:40.Usually I go to school at 7:00 .Sometimes I play soprts at 8:30.I often eat dinner at 6:00.

  This is my day!

  点评：时间后面可加上am或pm，就更明确了，加油！

   

• 批改教师：王思捷 ( 作文批改网 )
  批改时间：2013/5/10 13:20:09
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                            My day

  I usually get up at 6:30.I often eat （have)breakfast at 6:40.Usually I go to school at 7:00 .Sometimes I play soprts at 8:30^p.m..I often eat dinner at 6:00^p.m..

  This is my day!