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To introduce myself

发布时间：2013-05-09 19:31:42 作者：刘姝含  发布者：188988766 浏览次数：2887  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★★

                                To introduce myself
    Hi!My name is Liu Shu han.I study in 21中.I am 11 years old.My favourite day is Tuesday.We have art.science and English. My favourite  food is fish.They're healthy.My fovourite teacher is Miss Wang.She is our math teacher.She is strict and active. 

• 批改教师：王思捷 ( 作文批改网 )
  批改时间：2013/5/10 13:31:58
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                                  To introduce myself(Self-introduction)
      Hi!My name is Liu Shuhan.I study in 21中(No.21 Middle School).I am 11 years old.My favourite day is Tuesday.We have art.science and English ^classes. My favourite  food is fish.They're healthy.My fovourite teacher is Miss Wang.She is our math teacher.She is strict and active. 
• 批改教师：陈伟 ( 山东省 >> 烟台市 >> 烟台工贸技师学院 )
  批改时间：2013/5/13 11:03:56
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                                  To introduce myself
      Hi!My name is Liu Shu han ^{Liu Shuhan.}I study in 21中^{the 21st Middle school.}I am 11 years old.My favourite day is Tuesday.We have art.^,science and English. My favourite  food is fish.They're^{It is} healthy.My fovourite teacher is Miss Wang.She is our math teacher.She is strict and active. 

   

  语句通顺，内容也较详细，结构也可以。可以看出来，小作者的英语基础不错，希望继续努力，加油！