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my teacher
发布时间：2013-05-13 20:26:55 作者：王永彩 发布者：wangyongcai 浏览次数：2713 类别：英文作文
[小学五年级] 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇中心小学
My P.E teacher is Mr Do.
He's tall and thin.
He's very ferocious.
He's quite black.
His eyes are very small,its leg is very long.
His voice is very big,very hoarse.
He very responsible heart.
教师点评：
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批改教师：王思捷 ( 作文批改网 )
批改时间：2013/5/13 22:30:46
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点评内容：
My P.E teacher is Mr Do.
He's tall and thin.
He's very ferocious（这是贬义词，用strict）.
He's quite black.
His eyes are very small,its(and his) legs is(are) very long.
His voice is very big(loud),very hoarse.
He has a very responsible heart.
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批改教师：王天艳 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇英语备课组 )
批改时间：2013/5/21 16:46:22
点评指数：
点评内容：
My P.E. teacher is Mr Do Du.
He's tall and thin.
He's very ferocious.
He's quite black.
His eyes are very small,its leg is very long. and his legs are very long.
His voice is very big and hoarse.
He very responsible heart. He's very responsible.
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