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friendship

发布时间：2013-05-16 21:29:24 作者： 王相容  发布者：P110711206 浏览次数：3192  类别：英文作文  

  Friendship is a kind of human relations.It is a human instinct to make friends.When in trouble we need friends to offer us help,support and encouragement.With success achieved,we also need friends to share our joys.

  friendship is also one of the greatest pleasures that we can enjoy.It implies loyalty,cordiality,sympathy,affectionand readiness to help.no man can make the most of his life without carefully and conscientionsly striving to win the right kind of friends as he goes along.knowing how valuble friendship is,we should be very careful in making friends.

  real friends are those who have good character,superior ability and kingness off heart.real friends can share all our sorrows and double all our joys.While making friends,we should take to select those who have such fine qualities.Then we should treat our friends with courtesy,be careful not to interfere unreasonably with them,and not to ridicule their proceedings.we should foegive their failures and do our best to help them.In short,when we have established friendship,we ought to cherish and treasure it by means of words and deeds.Only thus,can we develop real friendship and keep the sacred lamp of friendship burning all our life.

 

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    Friendship is a kind of human relations.It is a human instinct to make friends.When ^we are in trouble we need friends to offer us help,support and encouragement.With success achieved,we also need friends to share our joys.

    friendship is also one of the greatest pleasures that we can enjoy.It implies loyalty,cordiality,sympathy,affection and readiness(understanding) to help.no man(Nobody) can make(live)the most of his life without carefully and conscientionsly striving to win the right kind of(real) friends as he goes along.knowing how valuble friendship is,we should be very careful in making friends.

    real friends are those who have good character,superior ability and kingness off heart(are kind-hearted).real friends can share all our sorrows and double all our joys ^{with you}.While making friends,we should take to select those who have such fine (high)qualities.Then we should treat our friends with courtesy,be careful not to interfere unreasonably with them,and not to(Don't be) ridicule^{ous on} their proceedings.we should foegive their failures and do(try) our best to help them.In short(Generally speaking),when we have established friendship,we ought to cherish and treasure it by means of words and deeds(dos).Only thus(in this way)can we develop real friendship and keep the sacred lamp of friendship burning all our life.