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发布时间：2013-05-18 18:34:23 作者：王永彩  发布者：wangyongcai 浏览次数：3222  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★

Hello,my name is wangyongcai.Look,my mom is cooking dinner in the kitchen.My dad is writing an e-mail.What is my grandpa doing?Oh,he's reaingthe newspaper.I am do homework

• 批改教师：王思捷 ( 作文批改网 )
  批改时间：2013/5/18 22:24:28
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  Hello,my name is wangyongcai（Wang Yongcai）.Look,my mom is cooking dinner in the kitchen.My dad is writing an e-mail.What is my grandpa doing?Oh,he's reaingthe newspaper.I am do^ing homework
• 批改教师：陈伟 ( 山东省 >> 烟台市 >> 烟台工贸技师学院 )
  批改时间：2013/5/19 15:47:40
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  Hello,my name is wangyongcai(Wang Yongcai).Look,my mom is cooking dinner in the kitchen.My dad is writing an e-mail.What is my grandpa doing? Oh,he's reaing (reading) the ^a newspaper.I am do (doing my) homework.

   

  对现在进行时的把握比较到位，继续努力。

• 批改教师：王天艳 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇英语备课组 )
  批改时间：2013/5/21 16:37:29
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  Hello,my name is Wang Yongcai.Look,my mom is cooking dinner in the kitchen.My dad is writing an e-mail.What is my grandpa doing?Oh,he's reading the newspaper.I am doing  homework.