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Last Weekend
发布时间:2013-05-20 21:07:59 作者:王唯 发布者:974968306 浏览次数:3637 类别:英文作文 优秀指数:★★★★★★★
[初中一年级] 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇中学
I was busy last weekend.The weather was sunny.I went swimming Saturday morning.In the evening,I played sports.Sunday morning,I listened to music.In the afternoon,I watched TV and did housework.I was so happy.
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批改教师:王思捷 ( 作文批改网 )
批改时间:2013/5/20 22:59:44
点评指数:★★
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点评:很好,继续保持。
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批改教师:王天艳 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇英语备课组 )
批改时间:2013/5/21 16:31:27
点评指数:★★
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I was busy last weekend.The weather was sunny.I went swimming Saturday morning.In the evening,I played sports.Sunday morning,I listened to music.In the afternoon,I watched TV and did housework.I was so happy.
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批改教师:周绍芬 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇英语备课组 )
批改时间:2013/5/23 19:26:48
点评指数:★★★
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I was busy last weekend.The weather was sunny.I went swimming (on) Saturday morning.In the evening,I played sports.Sunday morning,I listened to music.In the afternoon,I watched TV and did housework.I was so happy.
你的周末确实很忙碌,但我相信你的周末肯定很充实。Enjoy life, love life.