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My ideal

发布时间：2013-05-20 22:09:11 作者：王唯  发布者：974968306 浏览次数：2666  类别：英文作文  

Everyone has a dream，a dream to have the dream，has the dream only then to have the ideal，only for the struggle for the ideal life experience.

My ideal，but the current ideal，Is so enter a key school.The ideal is not far away，I keep on carving industry study，In order to cope with the challenge，the biggest challenge is to overcome their own.

Ambition is like dynamic life forward，then the ideal is the hope and dream of the soul.

Without ideals is no soul，and I have to prove myself to have ideal，have the soul.My ideal，is the focus of.I don’t question your ability，I want to go beyond the self，to achieve the ideal.

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  Everyone has a dream，a dream to have the dream，has the dream only then to have the ideal，only for the struggle for the ideal life experience.

  My ideal，but the current ideal，Is so enter a key school.The ideal is not far away，I keep on carving in dustry（daliy) study，In order to cope with the challenge，the biggest challenge is to overcome their own(themselves).

  Ambition is like dynamic life forward，then the ideal is the hope and dream of the soul.（the soul of hope and dream)

  Without ideals is no soul，and I have to prove myself to have ideal ^and have the soul.My ideal，is the focus of（on）.I don’t question（doubt) your（my） ability，I want to go beyond the self（itself)，to achieve the ideal.