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my weekend

发布时间：2013-05-23 18:36:05 作者：孟祥娇  发布者：meng123 浏览次数：3024  类别：中文作文   优秀指数：★★★★★

I'm going to have a busy weekend! I'm going to do  honework on Saturday morning. I'm going to visit  my grandparents on Saturday afternoon. I'm going to hiking on Saturday evening. I'm going to play football on Sunday morning. I'm going to linyi Park on Sunday afternoon.I'm going to xuzhihan，s  home on Sunday evening. What about you? 

• 批改教师：周绍芬 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇英语备课组 )
  批改时间：2013/5/23 19:12:17
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  I'm going to have a busy weekend! I'm going to visit grandparents on Saturday morning. I'm going to do homework on Saturday afternoon. I'm going to watch TV on Saturday evening. I'm going to play football on Sunday morning. I'm going to Zhongshan Park on Sunday afternoon.I'm going to cinema on Sunday evening. What about you? What are you going to do on the weekend?

  祥娇小朋友写得真不错。周末的活动安排的条条有理。向你学习哟！注意题目：My weekend plan

• 批改教师：李晨超 ( )
  批改时间：2013/5/24 12:06:55
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  I'm going to have a busy weekend! 

  I'm going to do  honework on Saturday morning.

  I'm going to visit  my grandparents on Saturday afternoon. 

  I'm going to hiking on Saturday evening. 

  I'm going to play football on Sunday morning. 

  I'm going to linyi Park on Sunday afternoon.

  I'm going to xuzhihan's XuZihan's home on Sunday evening. What about you? 

  Tips : 相信你将会度过一个愉快的周末，周日晚上是要去徐子菡的家玩吗？要细心啊，注意姓名的拼写！O(∩_∩)O

• 批改教师：王思捷 ( 作文批改网 )
  批改时间：2013/5/24 13:58:37
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  I'm going to have a busy weekend! I'm going to do honework(homework) on Saturday morning. I'm going to visit  my grandparents on Saturday afternoon. I'm going to hiking on Saturday evening. I'm going to play football on Sunday morning. I'm going to linyi(Linyi) Park on Sunday afternoon.I'm going to xuzhihan，s(Xu Zhihan's) home on Sunday evening. What about you?