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周末计划

发布时间：2013-05-23 20:01:31 作者：刘文杰  发布者：liouwenjie 浏览次数：2525  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★★★

I'm going to have a busy weekend! I'm going to visit grandparents on Saturday morning. I'm going to do homework on Saturday afternoon. I'm going to watch TV on Saturday evening. I'm going to play football on Sunday morning. I'm going to Zhongshan Park on Sunday afternoon.I'm going to cinema on Sunday evening. What about you? What are you going to do on the weekend?

• 批改教师：李晨超 ( )
  批改时间：2013/5/24 11:57:12
  点评指数：★★
  点评内容：
  

    I'm going to have a busy weekend! 

    I'm going to visit grandparents on Saturday morning. 

  I'm going to do homework on Saturday afternoon. 
  I'm going to watch TV on Saturday evening. 

   I'm going to play football on Sunday morning. 

  I'm going to Zhongshan Park on Sunday afternoon.

  I'm going tothe cinema on Sunday evening.

   What about you? What are you going to do on the weekend?
  

  Tips :你的周末将会过的很充实！加油，期待看到你更多的文章！

• 批改教师：王思捷 ( 作文批改网 )
  批改时间：2013/5/24 14:24:33
  点评指数：★
  点评内容：
  

  I'm going to have a busy weekend! 

  I'm going to visit grandparents on Saturday morning. 

  I'm going to do homework on Saturday afternoon. 

  I'm going to watch TV on Saturday evening. 

  I'm going to play football on Sunday morning. 

  I'm going to Zhongshan Park on Sunday afternoon.

  I'm going to cinema on Sunday evening. 

  What about you? What are you going to do on the weekend?

  整体不错，就是注意排版。