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My holiday

发布时间：2013-05-26 11:50:06 作者：李莉  发布者：·.0+ 浏览次数：2002  类别：中文作文  

I'm going to have a busy holiday.I'm go to Linyi by car.On monday.I'm going to park.I'm took pictures and play.On Tuesday .I'm do homework.On wednesay.I'm watch TV.On Thursday.I'm cleaing room.On Friday I'm listen to music. I love my holiday.   

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  批改时间：2013/5/26 13:10:52
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  I'm going to have a busy holiday.I'm ^will go to Linyi by car.On monday.I'm going(I will go) to park.I'm took(I'm going to take) pictures and play.On Tuesday .I'm do(I will do) homework.On wednesay(Wednesday).I'm watch(I will watching) TV.On Thursday.I'm(I will) cleaing room.On Friday I'm(I will) listen to music. I love my holiday.   

  点评：表示将来在干某事有三种：be going to，will do和will doing。其中be going to表示早已经计划好的事，而will do带有一定随机性，will doing更精确，表示将来正在做的事。