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my children's day

发布时间：2013-05-28 19:58:19 作者：孙晓娜  发布者：2440028826 浏览次数：2926  类别：英文作文  

i'm going to the zoo with my mother my borther my sister and  my father. i'm going to by bus.i'm going to see eiephants,take picture and eat good food.i'm going to this morning. i'm so happy.

• 批改教师：王思捷 ( 作文批改网 )
  批改时间：2013/5/28 22:11:49
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  i'm going to the zoo with my mother my borther my sister and  my father. i'm going to (there)by bus.i'm going to see eiephants(elephants),take picture and eat good food.i'm going to this morning. i'm so happy.

  点评：I作为人称代词要大写。

• 批改教师：李晨超 ( )
  批改时间：2013/5/31 20:29:37
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  i'm going to the zoo with my mother my borther my sister and  my father. (my family )i'm going to (there)by bus.i'm going to see eiephants(elephants),take picture^s and eat good food.i'm going to this morning. i'm so happy.

  点评：I作为人称代词要大写。单词掌握不够劳！要努力了！