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My Children'day

发布时间：2013-05-28 20:32:52 作者：周璇  发布者：zhouxuan 浏览次数：2729  类别：英文作文  

   I am going to Qingdao with my father my mother and my borther.I am going to eat good food,take pictures and see sea.I am going to Oingdao by bus.I am going this holiday.Have a good time.

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     I am going to ^{go to} Qingdao with my father my mother and my borther.I am going to eat good food,take pictures and see sea.I am going to Oingdao by bus.I am going(will go there) this holiday ^and Have(have) a good time.
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     I am going to Qingdao with my father my mother^parents and my borther.(brother)I am going to eat good food,take pictures and see sea.(see the sea) I am going to Oingdao (there )by bus.I am going this holiday ^and Have(have) a good time.

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