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my favourite season（二次作文）

发布时间：2013-06-01 18:07:32 作者：王永彩  发布者：wangyongcai 浏览次数：2632  类别：英文作文  

My favourite season is spring.Because spring is windy and warm.I can plant trees and fly kites.I like fall and winter too.   The fall is cool and windy.The sky is very blue.The leaves are colourful.In winter I can skate and make a Snowman.              I like spring,fall and winter very much!  

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