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My holiday(二次作文）

发布时间：2013-06-02 09:37:41 作者：王俐  发布者：1394771346 浏览次数：2661  类别：英文作文  

   It was a long holiday. We left linyi on May 1st and got to Jinan on the 2nd .On the first day ,I went to a park with my family. On the 3rd ,I went sking with my sisther and my brother. On the 4th, I did my homework.On the 5th,I boughut presents for my uncle. We got back to linyi by piane on the 6th.For the last day of the holiday,we relaxed and prerared to go back to work or school.I was so happy!

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     It was a long holiday. We left linyi on May 1st and got to Jinan on the ^May 2nd .On the first day ,I went to a park with my family. On the 3rd ^day ,I went sking with my sisther and my brother. On the 4th ^day, I did my homework.On the 5th ^day,I boughut presents for my uncle. We got back to linyi by piane on the 6th ^day.For the last day of the holiday,we relaxed and prerared to go back to work or school.I was so happy!

  点评：1.世界上只有一个临沂市，因此正确写法是“Linyi”。

          2.go to表示到某地去，过去时态为went to.

        3.一般而言，在day前面的单词不用简写，例如“在第三天”写作“On the third day”.

        4.go back表示回到某地，过去时态为went back

        5.piane是什么意思，难道是“plane”吗？