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My favourite season

发布时间：2013-06-04 18:43:04 作者：李佳颖  发布者：lijiaying 浏览次数：2241  类别：中文作文   优秀指数：★

My favourite season

    My favourite season is spring.beacause I can fly kites.I can plant trees,too.The weather is warm and sundy.I can wear my shirt.I  am happy.I like spring best!

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  My favourite season

      My favourite season is spring.^,beacause I can fly kites.I can plant trees,too.The weather is warm and sundy (sunny).I can wear my shirt.I am happy.I like spring best!

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  My favourite season

      My favourite season is spring.beacause(Beacause) I can fly kites.I can plant trees,too.The weather is warm and sundy（sunny).I can wear my shirt.I  am happy.I like spring best!