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My favourite season

发布时间：2013-06-10 20:10:20 作者：李玥  发布者：liyue2008.2班 浏览次数：2514  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★

                李玥   五年级二班             My favourite season is spring. because spring is to warm,I can plant trees.I can fly kites,and go hiking. I like spring very much！

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                  李玥   五年级二班             My favourite season is spring. because spring is to warm,I can plant trees.I can fly kites,and go hiking. I like spring very much！

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  My favourite season is spring. because spring is to warm,I can plant trees.I can fly kites,and go hiking. I like spring very much！

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      My favourite season is spring. （，）because spring is to warm,^and I can plant trees.I can fly kites,and go hiking.I like spring very much！