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发布时间:2013-06-11 12:28:57 作者:乔秀晴 发布者:192255831 浏览次数:2735 类别:英文作文
[小学五年级] 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇安头小学
I usually eat brearfast at 7;00.a.m. Iusually do morning exercises at 8;00.a.m. I usually play sports at 3;00.p.m. I usually eat dinner at 6;oo.p.m.
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批改教师:王思捷 ( 作文批改网 )
批改时间:2013/6/11 14:01:13
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I usually eat brearfast at 7;00.a.m. I usually do morning exercises at 8;00.a.m. I usually play (do)sports at 3;00.p.m. I usually eat dinner at 6;oo.p.m.
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批改教师:陈伟 ( 山东省 >> 烟台市 >> 烟台工贸技师学院 )
批改时间:2013/6/12 21:09:21
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I usually eat have brearfast (breakfast)at 7;00.a.m. Iusually do morning exercises at 8;00.a.m. I usually play sports at 3;00.p.m. I usually eat have dinner at 6;oo.p.m.