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My favourite season(第二次作文)
发布时间:2013-07-06 13:35:47 作者:刘晓慧 发布者:liuxiaohui 浏览次数:2480 类别:英文作文 优秀指数:★★★
[小学五年级] 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇中心小学
My favourite season
My favourite season is spring.Because I can plant trees.The weather is warm.In warm weather,I am very happy!
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批改教师:陈伟 ( 山东省 >> 烟台市 >> 烟台工贸技师学院 )
批改时间:2013/7/6 18:59:49
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My favourite season
My favourite season is spring.(,) Bbecause I can plant trees.The weather is warm.In warm weather,I am very happy!
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批改教师:王思捷 ( 作文批改网 )
批改时间:2013/7/15 19:53:13
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My favourite season
My favourite season is spring.Because I can plant trees.The weather is warm.In warm weather,I am very happy!