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My weekend

发布时间：2013-07-06 20:33:07 作者：刘晓慧  发布者：liuxiaohui 浏览次数：3417  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★★★

My weekend   There are two days on the weekend,Saturday and Sunday.On Saterday,I go to my dancing class in the morning and do my homework in the afternoon,and I often help my mother do some cleaning.   On Sunday,I always visit grandparents in the morning and do some reading in the afternoon.After dinner,I often watch TV with my parents.At that time,we can talk with each other and say something happily.We often have a good time.

• 批改教师：陈伟 ( 山东省 >> 烟台市 >> 烟台工贸技师学院 )
  批改时间：2013/7/7 11:22:36
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  My weekend      There are two days on the weekend weekends,Saturday and Sunday.On Saterday,I usually go to my dancing class in the morning and do my homework in the afternoon, and I often help my mother do some cleaning.      On Sunday, I always visit my grandparents in the morning and do some reading in the afternoon. After dinner, I often watch TV with my parents. At that time, we can talk with each other and say something happily.We often have a good time.   点评：本文围绕周末安排展开叙述，发挥自然，叙述有条理，并使用了多个表达时间顺序的词组结构，如：on saterday, after dinner, at that time等让整篇文章读起来更加顺畅自然。总体来说，这是一篇比较好的小学英语作文。 另外，“周末”英语表达可以是：at /on the weekend; at/on weekends后者可泛指“每一个周末”；前面往往特指某一个周末。

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  批改时间：2013/7/15 20:00:34
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  My weekend   There are two days on the (at)weekend,Saturday and Sunday.On Saterday(Saturday),I go to my dancing class in the morning and do my homework in the afternoon,and I often help my mother do some cleaning.   On Sunday,I always visit grandparents in the morning and do some reading in the afternoon.After dinner,I often watch TV with my parents.At that time,we can talk with each other and say something happily.We often have a good time.

• 批改教师：王天艳 ( 山东省 >> 临沂市 >> 罗庄区 >> 黄山镇 >> 黄山镇英语备课组 )
  批改时间：2013/7/17 21:08:47
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  My weekend   There are two days on the weekend,Saturday and Sunday.On Saterday Saturday,I go to my dancing class in the morning and do my homework in the afternoon,and I often help my mother do some cleaning.   On Sunday,I always visit grandparents in the morning and do some reading in the afternoon.After dinner,I often watch TV with my parents.At that time,we can talk with each other and say something happily.We often have a good time.