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My weekend.

发布时间：2013-08-01 11:19:05 作者：乔秀晴  发布者：192255831 浏览次数：2645  类别：英文作文  

    I usually go shopping on the weekend.I usually watch TV on the weekeng.I often go hiking on the weekend. Sometimes I visit my grandparents. I am very happy.

• 批改教师：陈伟 ( 山东省 >> 烟台市 >> 烟台工贸技师学院 )
  批改时间：2013/8/6 16:25:17
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      I usually go shopping on the weekend.I usually watch TV on the weekeng.I often go hiking on the weekend. Sometimes I visit my grandparents. I am very happy.

  评价：真确使用了usually，often，sometimes等频度副词，继续努力。

• 批改教师：王思捷 ( 作文批改网 )
  批改时间：2013/8/9 13:24:57
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      I usually go shopping on the weekend.I usually watch TV on the weekeng.(weekends)I often go hiking on (at)the weekend. Sometimes I visit my grandparents. I am very happy.

  点评：这三篇作文语言错误虽然很少，但文章略微过于简练了一些。