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Lastweekend

发布时间：2013-08-29 09:18:03 作者：孟晨  发布者：mengchen 浏览次数：3531  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★★

OnSaturdaymorning,Iwashedmyclothes．Iwenttoapark.

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Intheafternoon,Ididmyhomework.Iwentfishing.

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Intheevening,IwatchedTV.

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Onsundaymorning,Icleanedmyroom.

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Intheafternoon,Ivisitedmygrandparents.

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Intheevening,Iplayedfootball.

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Thatwasabusyweekend.

• 批改教师：王思捷 ( 作文批改网 )
  批改时间：2013/8/29 13:15:55
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  On Saturday morning,I was hed my clothes．I went to a park.

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  In the afternoon,I did my homework.I went fishing.

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  In the evening,I watched TV.

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  On sunday morning,I cleaned my room.

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  In the afternoon,I visited my grandparents.

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  In the evening,I played football.

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  That was a busy weekend.

  写的是不错，但英语词与词之间要空出大约一个字母的空格的。

• 批改教师：陈伟 ( 山东省 >> 烟台市 >> 烟台工贸技师学院 )
  批改时间：2013/8/30 22:51:22
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  On Saturday morning, I washed my clothes．I went to a park.

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  In the afternoon,I did my homework.I went fishing.

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  In the evening,I watched TV.

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  On sunday morning,I cleaned my room.

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  In the afternoon,I visited my grandparents.

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  In the evening,I played football.

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  That was a busy weekend. 点评：孟晨同学经过简短的几句话，将自己的繁忙（busy）的周末描述了出来、在具体的语言点上，孟晨同学对介词in，on表示时间的用法掌握比较好。“在早上、下午、晚上”用in，如in the morning/afternoon/evening,具体到某一天的早上下午晚上时要用介词on，如：On Saturday morning