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Myfamily

发布时间：2013-08-29 09:31:22 作者：孟晨  发布者：mengchen 浏览次数：3173  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★

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Myfatherisstrongthanme.

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Mymotheristallerthanme.

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Mybrotherisshorterthanme.

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Mysisterissmallerthanme.

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Mymotherisolderthanfather,Myfatherisolderthan

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me,Iolderthansister,Mysisterisolderthanbrother.

• 批改教师：徐之三 ( 北京市 >> 海淀区 >> 花园路街道 )
  批改时间：2013/8/29 9:40:28
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  Myfatherisstrongthanme.

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  Mymotheristallerthanme.

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  Mybrotherisshorterthanme.

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  Mysisterissmallerthanme.

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  Mymotherisolderthanfather,Myfatherisolderthan

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  me,Iolderthansister,Mysisterisolderthanbrother.
• 批改教师：王思捷 ( 作文批改网 )
  批改时间：2013/8/29 13:19:08
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  My father is strong^er than me.

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  My mother is taller than me.

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  My brother is shorter than me.

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  My sister is smaller than me.

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  My mother is older than father,My father is older than

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  me,I ^am older than sister,My sister is older than brother.

  下次写文章时把单词的空格留出来。

• 批改教师：陈伟 ( 山东省 >> 烟台市 >> 烟台工贸技师学院 )
  批改时间：2013/8/30 22:43:44
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  My father is strong^er than me.

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  My mother is taller than me.

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  My brother is shorter than me.

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  My sister is smaller than me.

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  My mother is older than ^my father,My father is older than

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  me,I ^am older than ^my sister,My sister is older than brother. 点评：孟晨同学在文中正确运用了形容词的比较级结构，希望在以后能够继续努力，在英语的写作上不断取得进步。另外，关于本文不断可以介绍年龄，高矮，还可以描述家人的外表，爱好等等。