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初三英语作文

发布时间：2013-10-04 22:44:54 作者：颜廷毅  发布者：qfyty 浏览次数：3935  类别：英文作文  

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  请根据下面John在信中所提出的困惑，以Mary的名言给他写一封回信，帮助他解决问题。80个词左右。

  Dear Editor,

  I am a middle school student, I have many hobbies. I like playing football very much. But I can’t do it ^well. I want to join the football team. But my parents don’t allow(agree). So I often argue with my parents. Should I be allowed to make my own decisions? What should I do?

  回信：

  Dear John,

  I’m glad to help you to deal with your problems. First, I think you should be allowed to practice (develop)your hobbies, but don’t let your hobbies get in the way of studying is also very important, do you agree?

  Then, I think you should talk with your parents instead of having argument with them. Maybe they will understand you. I also think you should be allowed to make your own decisions, but you’d better to listen to what your parents say ---Then have more experience than you, don’t they?

   

  Yours, Marry

   

  谢谢。
  
  
  
  
  
  

  根据正面的调查表写一篇调查报告，总结他们的学习方法。

  Names	Ways of learning English
  Wang lei	Reading English magazines
  Li Mei	Studying grammar
  Zhang Han	Joining an English club
  Gong Ping	Making flashcards

   

   

  ^On The other day, my friends and I talked about the best way to learn more English. Wang Lei thought that the best way to learn English is reading English magazines, Li Mei said studying grammar was also very helpful. Zhang Han felt differently, he thought joining an English club is the best way to improve his English, Gong Ping said making flashcard also helped a little. I said listening to tapes was the best way. We learned a lot from each other.

  假如你叫Zhang Jian, 是一名中学生。父母和教师对你要求非常严格。你有很多家规和校规。请写一篇80个词左右的短文，简要介绍一下你的家规和校规，并且谈一下你的看法。

  My mane is Zhang Jian, I have many rules at home and school. At my home, I have to get up at 6:00 a.m. and go to bed until 11:00 p.m. I’m not allowed to go out at night because my parents think studying is the most important thing. I also can’t play computer games except holidays. At my school I have too much homework and I have to wear uniforms every day. But I think uniforms are ugly. I go to school at 9:00 a.m. and go home at 5:00 p.m. I’m too tired, I want to have a rest. I think I should be allowed to get up late on weekends and I should be allowed to practice (develop)my hobbies.