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发布时间：2013-10-14 13:29:09 作者：颜廷毅  发布者：qfyty 浏览次数：3164  类别：英文作文  

假设你是第九中学学生会主席（chair of the Students’ Union）李华。你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛（English Speech Contest），想邀请你校附近某国际学校的外籍教师Smith女士来做评委（judge）。请参照以下比赛通知，用英语给她写一封100词左右的邀请函（invitation）。开头和结束语已经给出，不计总词数。

English Speech Contest

Topic: Man and Nature

Time: 3：00—5:00 pm, June 16

Place: Room 502

Number of Contestants(选手)： 20 students

Tel: 4487665

                         Welcome!

要求：需包含以下要点：

1.       个人简介（姓名，职务等）

2.       比赛通知中的所有信息；

3.       对被邀请人提出希望。

 

 

Dear Ms. Smith,

My name is Li Hua. I’m chair of the Students’ Union at Night Middle school. In our school, it’s going to be an English Speech Contest. We want you to come to the contest as a judge. The speech topic is Man and Nature. The speech contest will hold in Room 502 at 3:00—5:00 pm, on June 16. There will be 20 Contestants take part in the contest. I believe the speech contest will be really wonderful. I think you will enjoy this. of course we also need a judge like you. If you agree, please call 4487665.

I am looking forward to your reply.

With best wishes,

Li Hua

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  假设你是第九中学学生会主席（chair of the Students’ Union）李华。你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛（English Speech Contest），想邀请你校附近某国际学校的外籍教师Smith女士来做评委（judge）。请参照以下比赛通知，用英语给她写一封100词左右的邀请函（invitation）。开头和结束语已经给出，不计总词数。

  English Speech Contest

  Topic: Man and Nature

  Time: 3：00—5:00 pm, June 16

  Place: Room 502

  Number of Contestants(选手)： 20 students

  Tel: 4487665

                           Welcome!

  要求：需包含以下要点：

  1.       个人简介（姓名，职务等）

  2.       比赛通知中的所有信息；

  3.       对被邀请人提出希望。

   

   

  Dear Ms. Smith,

  My name is Li Hua. I’m chair (chairman)of the Students’ Union at Night Middle school. In our school, it’s going to be ^held an English Speech Contest. We want you to come to the contest as a judge. The speech topic is Man and Nature. The speech contest will hold (be held)in Room 502 at 3:00—5:00 pm, on June 16. There will be 20 Contestants take part in the contest. I believe the speech contest will be really wonderful. I think you will enjoy this. of course we also need a judge like you. If  you agree, please call 4487665.

  I am looking forward to your reply.

  With best wishes,

  Li Hua