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My bed room

发布时间：2013-11-07 20:35:34 作者：钟如雪  发布者：zhongruxue 浏览次数：3221  类别：英文作文   优秀指数：★★

   Look!This is my bed room.It's tidy.That is my yellow bed.There is a clock on the end table.It's red.I like it very much.My pictuie is on the wall.The shoes are under the bed.The chair is under the desk.I like my bed room.What about you?

 

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  批改时间：2013/11/8 21:09:10
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     Look!This is my bed room.It's tidy.That is my yellow bed.There is a clock on the end ^{of the} table.It's red.I like it very much.My pictuie is on the wall.The shoes are under the bed.The chair is under the desk.I like my bed room.What about you?